Syndic No.7
Syndic Literary Journal

Haibun by Neal & Elaine Whitman

HAIBUN AUTHORS ELAINE & NEAL WHITMAN / CITY: PACIFIC GROVE

5/12/12

Japanese Friendship Garden

San Jose California

PLAY > “TILTING TOWARD THE SUN”

 

Tilting Toward the Sun

On a spring morning, we enter the Japanese Friendship Garden in San Jose, California – husband and wife, haiku poet and photographer. I had been invited to recite haiku there that afternoon. But, the morning is ours –– ours to practice our respective arts. I make notes – – – fleeting moments in time / the ah-ness of mid- spring. She takes note – still life in each frame / the such-ness of a May day. For each of us, one thing happens at a time and captures our attention – we show it with word or image. A rule of haiku: two things that do and do not go together. Resonance. A rule of composition: two subjects that cause the viewer to look back and forth. Reverberation. The haiku poet’s path is never straight: where will it end? The photographer takes aim and looks for a vanishing point: where does it lead? The poem not read is unfinished. The photograph not seen is undeveloped. All art is an offer made, a gift.

the gate unlocked –
a morning cool and calm
opens our eyes

 

open at ten
early arrivals
first in line

 

her suggestion:
take your time
spring outing

 

arms akimbo
centering my attention
below the surface

 

the pine tree
hovering over the pond
my own reflection

 

set in stone
a haiku tablet
my poem adrift

Authors/Artists Bios

Authors/Artist Bios 2

Neal Whitman lives in Pacific Grove, California, and in nearby Carmel is a volunteer docent at poet Robinson Jeffers Tor House. He splits his time between Western form and haiku poetry.
Elaine Whitman is a collage artist, photographer, and haiku poet. She also plays the Native American flute for hospice patients and their families.
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